Black Ghost

6/10 I'm sure it means something, but I don't get it. :?

Hey! I'm magicman, and if you ever have any questions or need a critique, feel free to drop me a PM. ^_^ MM

I always knew YWS would stir up some international conflict. XD

Yeah, no offense, but I think us instructors are probably less intimidating. :? And, again, we're free! Who can argue with that? MM

Those look really cool! But alas, I don't have a few hundred dollars to spend. Oh well. :(

7/10

Um...no. Amy Lee's voice is even more amazing live than in a recording studio. Sure, her voice sounds off when she's running around on stage trying to put on a ...

5/10 a little blurry, and the colors aren't that great. MM

I envy you. When do you get the time to write so much? :D But seriously, it sounds as if things are going well, and I hope Tears turns out ...

The cave was cold and dark. It seemed like they had been walking in this cave for hours. A cool breeze was blowing through the cave from up ahead. The ...

Fun stuff. ^_^ MM

Maybe you guys should give out free critiques to new customers, so they can see if your critiquing is really top notch enough to warrant points. :) And I, like ...

"Can I help you sir?" Daniel asked as he walked up to a man in his early 30's . "Not at the moment." In fiction, please spell out numbers. And ...

7/10 Looks creepy.

Thought it was a little dissapointing as well. Loved Umbridge though. :P